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Re: Fantasy
Hey, Marshmallow Warrior! There is one error you repeat constantly: You always need to capitalize your I's Things were unravelling to fast, He was never going to stop, was he? ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Rosey! You've revealed your self! *ponders revealing self*
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
Done, Poet!
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: The Importance of Doing
Hey, Abstract Poet! Here as requested! resounding barrump Put onomatopoeias in italics. It emphasizes them and makes it cleared where they are. A small smile waltzed on the edges of ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Twilight
You'll find a large anti-Twilight club here. I hate Twilight, but I don't want to start another debate (there ate tons of threads like this) My advice? Go read Anne ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
I'll get to it tomorrow, promise! (eleven o'clock here, heh.)
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Prologue
The only problem with Joyce's feelings being put in is that your story would be switching to third person omnipotent, a voice that really bothers me. Voice/POV Third person limited ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Hello to all!
You'll find a large anti-Twilight crowd here. You'll also find obsessive Twilighters. *glances around for Edward fans*
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Is it rude to tresspass?
Nice to meet you, Lizzie. I adore MCR. So: Any favorite books other than Harry Potter? What kind of genres do you write? -Sakura PS: I'm so murdering Ashlee Simpson ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Hello to all!
Hey, Eos/Kelsey! Welcome to the insane asylum! Er, YWS. I go by Sakura. First, I'm going to tell you some rules. ^_^ -No chatspeak. This is a writers' forum -- ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Prologue
Hey, Always a writer! Just a few nit-picks: Alanis scrambles up the latter after her. -Latter should be ladder . -Eh. I'm not really a big fan of this first ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Positive Chapter Two (edited)
Hey, mhmmcolleenx0! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ Yeah, spell check does that to me as well. Don't worry -- all the contractions (didn't,wasn't..etc) were fine. Onto ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Suicide Note
Heelllloooooooo, Lily! I guess I felt it was time to take matters into my own hands, time to relieve you of the burden dumped on you fourteen years ago. I ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: 9/11 Tribute
Hey, RayneChild! You are a very talented drawer! Critique: -I love the wings. The color really does give them definition. -Umm, the feet kind of look like hooves. Well, not ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: The Chosen One, Chapter One
Hey, 1stViolinS.C.! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ First of all: Why not post this is Historical Fiction? It is telling a true story, but it's purpose ...
Feb 1, 2009
