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Antigone Cadmus

  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Fantasy

    Hey, Marshmallow Warrior! There is one error you repeat constantly: You always need to capitalize your I's Things were unravelling to fast, He was never going to stop, was he? ...

    Feb 3, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Rosey! You've revealed your self! *ponders revealing self*

    Feb 3, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Antigone's Critique Shop

    Done, Poet!

    Feb 2, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The Importance of Doing

    Hey, Abstract Poet! Here as requested! resounding barrump Put onomatopoeias in italics. It emphasizes them and makes it cleared where they are. A small smile waltzed on the edges of ...

    Feb 2, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Twilight

    You'll find a large anti-Twilight club here. I hate Twilight, but I don't want to start another debate (there ate tons of threads like this) My advice? Go read Anne ...

    Feb 2, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Antigone's Critique Shop

    I'll get to it tomorrow, promise! (eleven o'clock here, heh.)

    Feb 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Prologue

    The only problem with Joyce's feelings being put in is that your story would be switching to third person omnipotent, a voice that really bothers me. Voice/POV Third person limited ...

    Feb 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello to all!

    You'll find a large anti-Twilight crowd here. You'll also find obsessive Twilighters. *glances around for Edward fans*

    Feb 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Is it rude to tresspass?

    Nice to meet you, Lizzie. I adore MCR. So: Any favorite books other than Harry Potter? What kind of genres do you write? -Sakura PS: I'm so murdering Ashlee Simpson ...

    Feb 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello to all!

    Hey, Eos/Kelsey! Welcome to the insane asylum! Er, YWS. I go by Sakura. First, I'm going to tell you some rules. ^_^ -No chatspeak. This is a writers' forum -- ...

    Feb 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Prologue

    Hey, Always a writer! Just a few nit-picks: Alanis scrambles up the latter after her. -Latter should be ladder . -Eh. I'm not really a big fan of this first ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Positive Chapter Two (edited)

    Hey, mhmmcolleenx0! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ Yeah, spell check does that to me as well. Don't worry -- all the contractions (didn't,wasn't..etc) were fine. Onto ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Suicide Note

    Heelllloooooooo, Lily! I guess I felt it was time to take matters into my own hands, time to relieve you of the burden dumped on you fourteen years ago. I ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: 9/11 Tribute

    Hey, RayneChild! You are a very talented drawer! Critique: -I love the wings. The color really does give them definition. -Umm, the feet kind of look like hooves. Well, not ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • General Articles Re: The Chosen One, Chapter One

    Hey, 1stViolinS.C.! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ First of all: Why not post this is Historical Fiction? It is telling a true story, but it's purpose ...

    Feb 1, 2009


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— Antoine de Saint-ExupĂ©ry, The Little Prince